A Poem
Friday, September 5th, 2008
Sowers, sowers, sowing seeds
Little black birds scattering
Rue and thistle
Cure and weed
Some strewn with ambition
Some mislaid carelessly
Cement scrapers tearing virgin skies
Bear spoiled fruit from sterile thighs
The lights, bright suns of wind spun strength
Ignite the night’s quiet suffering
Each desire, each created thing
Bows submissive at a throne
At inheritance’s intoxicating persuasive drone
The losers win and the winner dies
And make light in their respective prize
Royal royalty of life
Are masked in willful compromise
Of denial, “restraint,” pity, heartbreak, and neglect.
Life is the kingdom of the disposed and averse.
Philip Creamer, 2008
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Comment:
Publishing this poem accomplishes the goal it states in the ante-penultimate (a great term for “third from the end”) line. The poem itself reflects the take-and-give attitude with which all followers follow Jesus. And, yes, Herbert deliberately wrote the shape into the poem as he did with at least one other, “Easter Wings.”
This poem became my favorite when I first read it in college. It has remained so since. Ignore the numbers, of course. They are only provided to relate line-for-line with the paraphrase which follows. The paraphrase is an interpreted, applied, reading which may help clarify the sonnet for those who struggle a bit with Donne’s still-Elizabethan English. But no paraphrase can even approach catching the many subtleties Donne writes into the fourteenth of his Holy Sonnets. Click “read the rest of this entry” to see the paraphrase. Readers should know that in his youth and early poetry, before his personal commitment to Christ, Donne was indiscreet to say the least. So his pleadings come from an earnest humility and a desire to be transformed.
